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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-08 12:37 PM


into the light
go with me
lets take this risk
please just for me
this moment
this place
may not come again
we can be happy
no worries
no fears
let me take you there
dont stop and wonder
lets not hesitate
take this leap with me
i'll fall with you
every inch
dont pinch
this is no dream
its but love we've fallen into
just you and me
in the fold
letting love takes its hold..



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Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-09-08 03:23 PM


Bravissimi!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



roxane
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
2 posted 1999-09-13 01:53 PM


now a love poem of sorts...i am absolutely enchanted with your style. why else would i venture to page 8?
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