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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Because no one else shows their compassion. Why is it I bother to even care? Because I give in to no one's despair. Why must bitterness always fill my cup? Because the pain of others fills me up. Why do I not give in to newfound rage? Because I am no puppet on a stage. Why should I not give myself to the knife? Because there is some reason for my life. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your poetry is reason enough my friend - you reach many people with the power of your pen. Michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very good, and yes there is a reason for your life, actually I'm sure there are many reasons why you are here. As I have read your poetry I would have to say one reason your here is to be a friend, and guiding support to the many people who surround your life. Your gifted in your poetry and that makes you special too. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Truly humbling words from both of you, 'tis a great gift you give me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, I just issued you a check for one million reasons. Don't spend it all in one place. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent!!! The truth that lies beyond your questions and answers far outnumers the words in this poem. You have done a wonderful job with this. Without wasting a single word, you have spoken volumes and caused each of your readers to stop for just a bit and ask these questions of themselves. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
This is Good brother.. There are many reasons for you to stay alive.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
There are more reasons for choosing life than not, and not all of them are apparent. The here and the now has so many, your poetry is but one effecting all who read. And the futur? Well it holds a countless number to discover. Enjoy the search as best you can. Thanks for sharing all you do. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
DE: I can't ask you to not feel the way you do... despair doesn't respond to logic. But I can say I hope your world gets better soon... and that you continue to share your poems with us... When you can't find a reason on your own, turn here to the forum where so many people care for you. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Damn, this was one hell of a way to greet the start of my day. Another slice of humble pie anyone? Sorry, sarcasm is just my way. Thank you all for the sentiment, it truly amazes me that there are those that feel this way towards me. ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You are a wonderful person, a fantastic poet. You have many people that you have touched. And Yes, many that care a lot for you!!!!!!!!!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Your talent is limitless. You have a gift... Gifts are for giving, life is for living Your words give my life a lift. Keep writing, live on. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And you ask why I tell you there is some light in the world residing on people. I choose to see it in you, though you may deny it frined. As the others said, another masterpiece of short words, with a long-lasting effect. |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Wow .. another fantastic work ... thank you ... clearly, this is but one reason your here ... may others be revealed to you soon ... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream... I am not quite sure what to say that has already not been said... I would miss you if you were not here... is that a good reason? hehehe ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
These were just random thoughts that happened to come together well. Thank you. |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
WOW! I know so very well what you must feel like. Yet with each dawn I feel life renewed within. Don't give up! Angel |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Because to give in is to quit and you're made of sterner stuff...note I didn't say firmer...*g*.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-brother, this is truly excellent. You are a wonderful person and friend and you have touched me and so many more. You are an Excellent poet Soul-Bro. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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