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Open Poetry #2

A field of love...

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

0 posted 1999-09-29 02:15 AM

In a field of love
there grow many roses
each rose stands for a wish
But I only pick one rose
I only have one wish
...to be with you

So I stand in the field of love
and I pick the petals
off of my rose wish
and I watch the petals
fly on the wind
towards your heart

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

1 posted 1999-09-29 02:18 AM

Beautiful imagery! Soft, velvety rose petals dancing on the breeze towards the object of your affection, swirling around her in a funnel of love.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-09-29 02:22 AM

Soft and sweet....well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

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