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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-09-04 12:47 PM


I don’t know what to do
I pour my heart out to you
You just take it
You give no return
You don’t seem to mind
But I’m not sure
I can’t tell


You’re driving me crazy
Cause I love you so
You just soak it up
Like some sort of sponge
You might love me too
But I’m not sure
I can’t tell

© Copyright 1999 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Ruby dagger
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 76
Wyoming, MN, U.S.A
1 posted 1999-09-04 12:49 PM


I love how this poem makes you think how you treat people. it's very touching.

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Luv ya

Kelly

I'm no different than the average girl, my dreams wrap around the world. -Rebecca Lynn Howard

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