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DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
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0 posted 1999-09-28 01:14 PM



This thing they call e-mail,
Has pushed me to the brink.
It's made me feel like hell.
So I'll have another drink.

I've tried to send it to a friend.
It says there's no host found.
I thought this highway never ends.
But I find myself bound.

Name server,what is that?
What will it ever take?
If this you know,I tip my hat.
I'm just about to break.

I have the address I wish to send.
The things that are so cute.
They were to go to a special friend.
Now my words seem somehow mute.

What can I do to fix the mess?
How can I send my letter?
For me is it a test?
Please help me to get better.

HELP!

DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

© Copyright 1999 DBeth - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
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1 posted 1999-09-28 01:19 PM


ROFL...know the feeling.

I'm not sure if you're being serious though, are you?

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 1999-09-28 01:21 PM


ROFL... If I had a dollar for every time I've cursed at yahoo or hotmail, I could retire tomorrow and live a life of luxury!
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
3 posted 1999-09-28 01:21 PM


'and lead us not into temptation, deliver us some email, for thine are AOL!
DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
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providence,ky.42450
4 posted 1999-09-28 02:51 PM


I was serious at first,but after only 5-yeah thats right 5 hours of very mean searching,I DID IT!Yea Me!Still don't know anymore than before but somehow I was able to E-MAIL again!Yipee!Thank you all for the comments and laughter.Now I'm ROFL!I hope this doesn't do it again.Thanks you all!

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

Denise
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5 posted 1999-09-29 12:08 PM


Very good poem about a very annoying problem!
Mine still doesn't work!

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Denise

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
6 posted 1999-09-29 02:43 AM


ROFL!
E-mail sux!
But it's a love-hate relationship yanno!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 1999-09-29 09:21 AM


I know the feeling, very good DBeth enjoyed the read

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-09-29 10:17 AM


LOL...been there, done that for sure!!
DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 110
providence,ky.42450
9 posted 1999-09-29 02:51 PM


Thank you all for the comments!
I T-H-I-N-K I have it worked out
now. LOL!
Gotta run, DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

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