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Open Poetry #2

porch toward the road

percent
New Member

since 1999-09-25

Posts 3
USA

0 posted 1999-09-26 12:07 PM

In the light of days we remain,
in constant states of emotional restraint.
Walk through eyes of greedy hands,
which grab and take, all we can.
Repetitious loops of idle stir,
in whirl and whirs of dizzy blur.
Let me shake the mock routine,
to live my life in someone's dream.

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thank you for listening
percent

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

1 posted 1999-09-26 12:10 PM

Wow...what imagery...a wonderful piece...well done!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-26 08:53 AM

very well written

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

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