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ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-09-24 05:38 AM


Like petals on a rose
beauty every which way
how surely friends show us
were needed each day

friends always can tell
when you need a kiss
no gimmiks to sell
no cries for help missed

storms will not rise
above horizons in sight
need not close your eyes
the picture's just right

these are the portraits
our minds like to paint
filling these orders
is why friends are great!

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-24-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
StuffN
New Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 7
USA
1 posted 1999-09-24 07:01 AM


This is why I consider you such a good friend, sweetheart. Job well done. :*
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-24 10:53 AM


Friends...we all need them

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

DBeth
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110
providence,ky.42450
3 posted 1999-09-24 11:12 AM


Very good poem!Friends are what makes life complete.As for me,I feel I have the best friend in the world.She's like a sister.
Plus with all of you guys,it makes my day brighter.Thanks for the read!

DBeth


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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
4 posted 1999-09-24 05:29 PM


You expressed this very well. I too, share
the sentiments of friends.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS! You will soon see..
we will be a family of friends to be.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
5 posted 1999-09-24 06:18 PM


My sincere thanks goes out to all of you who are willing to take the time to write a comment on my verses. I truly appreciate any input or feelings, and hope to see some of your work as well.
ThUnDeRkYsS
And thank you, Mel

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-09-24 07:42 PM


Friendship..one of life's many blessings.
Well written and versed. And Welcome my new friend..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



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