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I hope I get some responses this time... :)
| Open Poetry #2 |
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I hope I get some responses this time... :) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Magical Ride We'll fly so high Beyond the moon to touch the light Embrace me in your arms this night Hold on tight Fly away Dream away Take my hand Fade into blue Beneath the deep green sea Sink within Close your eyes Don't be afraid I will hold you Trust in me We are free I want you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope to hear your comments!!  Thanks!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and sweet, emits positive embers, to me, of love and lust. I like the last line, that's always a nice thing to hear from someone. I got that message on my pager once...it made me tingle! ------------------ *shadowy-one* |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Its amazing how people can live so far apart but all be experiencing life in the same ways. I completely understand the message in this writing, its so universal, yet so individual for us all. By the way, I loved it!!! ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You both!! I am glad you enjoyed it!! Justbleu |
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