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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas

0 posted 1999-09-16 09:35 PM


Call me crazy
call me sane -
But I want him
Just the same.
That is why I
didn't meet him -
For I simply
do respect him.
Our "love" is just
so fresh & new...
I didn't want
to lose it too.
I want to take
this nice & slow -
give our fondness
time to grow...
If I had him
way too soon -
under tender
Memphis moon...
Would we wake
here in the morn
with a friendship
tattered, torn ?
I respect
myself as well -
and believe me
it was Hell...
knowing he was
passing through -
what's a lonely
girl to do ?
Do I love him
for one night ?
Or do I wait -
this feel's so right...
So I took
a chance on fate -
Told him maybe
we should wait...
Now I sit here
all alone -
and he's journeyed
on toward's home.
I have faith
that he'll be mine...
True love stands
the test of time.
I still want him
just the same...
Call me crazy -
call me sane.


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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale




[This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 09-16-99).]

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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-09-16 09:39 PM


Call you a lost cause LOL This was a delightful read...hope it all works out the way you want it to...:-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
2 posted 1999-09-16 09:41 PM


Thanks Beck for ALL the support !! he he

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 1999-09-16 09:41 PM


OK......you're crazy.
Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
4 posted 1999-09-16 09:41 PM


THAT'S IT! If you get a collection going, I'm pitching in. You two have GOT to meet. I'm dying here, reading what the two of you have written. Give me a break, a heart can only take so much!
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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5 posted 1999-09-16 09:51 PM


I'm with you Tara! I'm dying here!!! *LOL*
Femme you've gotta go meet him or me and Tara will drown!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
6 posted 1999-09-16 09:58 PM


You girls are SO silly...you're not gonna drown, I am!!! And thank you for all your financial support!!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 1999-09-16 10:01 PM


Poet what we gonna do you with you love sick puppies? LOL...great poem! You're not nuts, just in love...go and get em'!!!!!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
8 posted 1999-09-16 10:12 PM


Very well said, mi-lady.
And yes, you are crazy and making me that way too.

Michael

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 1999-09-16 10:28 PM


PFF,
The poem was so simple and direct that it hit a home run with me. You are talented and I love the way you write. I know why you waited. But that would take more then this space would allow. LOL

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
10 posted 1999-09-16 11:31 PM


Poet.....what a wonderful poem.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

IsabelleSkye
Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253

11 posted 1999-09-16 11:47 PM


I waited over a year PFF. Believe me, it was totally worth the wait, by the time we met we knew each other inside and out!
Good Luck
*hugs*
I.Skye

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Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
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12 posted 1999-09-17 01:24 AM


Thank you Izzy, you give me hope....***kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
13 posted 1999-09-17 02:00 AM



You already KNOW I think your crazy...

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
14 posted 1999-09-17 02:02 AM


Yes Christopher...I know....(sighing deeply)

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
15 posted 1999-09-17 03:48 AM


and the magic continues...I'm waiting on the next one already..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


moonmoon
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
16 posted 1999-09-18 10:52 PM



Whoaa..Count me in too people, I too am going nuts here ..

How long are you guys gonna keep us all waiting for the two of you to meet?? Geesh..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr



beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 183

17 posted 1999-09-20 03:16 PM


I gotta back her up on this one. Always err on the side of prudence.

The poem was lovely and I'm sure, nay, very sure, that things will work out betwixt you two . I get happy just thinking of you two.

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Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing.

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
18 posted 1999-09-20 03:59 PM


I always get warm fuzzies when you two write to each other.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


Jim Raynor
Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA
19 posted 1999-09-20 06:25 PM


!
W
O
W
!
Great Poem Really it is


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$*%Jim Raynor%*$

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