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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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SHE IS She sings, a soft voice in my night Dancing in dreams of lucid light. Silk white elegance in air, She is all to me debonaire. An August rose full in bloom. She is the mist of sweet perfume. She is satin, she is lace. She is an angel, she is grace, She is a smile across my eyes. A heavenly kiss on crystal skies. She is laughter in a thunderstorm, A gentle touch that keeps me warm. She is hope, she is need. All for which my soul may bleed. A wisp of Time's endless endeavor, She is love, she is forever. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well met Dark Lord. You seem to echo my sentiments exactly everytime. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Of course this was a wonderful poem! You two getting sappy in here! J/K...it's great to see love, may we get to watch it grow! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
ohhhh another one...so exquisite. You really are eloquent. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
eloquent, yep, that is the perfect word to describe this, and romantic, and beautiful...well lets just say I love it! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful Michael....one lucky girl ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely beautiful, Michael! Loved it! ------------------ Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
IT IS perfect! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Michael, what can I say that hasn't already be said? this is a beautiful piece, full of tenderness and passion...wonderfully wrought. She Is one lucky lady! :-) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Stefanie71 Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 13 |
this was so beautiful and really touched me. you have a gift. trully a lovely poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, It reads like something I might have written. And of cource I thought it was great. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Michael, It reads beautiful and she is a lucky lady.Thanks for your support.: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
That was awesome Michael..  ..The two of you make the rest of our anticipation shingle.. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Your work is awesome as always.... ------------------ Helewes |
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