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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2000-06-20 10:34 PM


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Yours is a bitterness that has captured you on a downhill slide.
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I’ve watched through the years as you clung with such fierce determination to your angers. You’ve held those rages to your bosom, ever nursing them as though they were beloved children.
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Beware, my friend, they will rust your spirit out like an old car in a town by the ocean.
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The time you dissipate in that ancient chair, on those antique rockers of memory, allowing those bitter winds of mutation to whistle round your heart's door, is ravaging you.
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Those rusting springs of rage will stab you some day.
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You will discover one day the damage done; your loving soul becoming increasingly feeble, and your caring nature slipping away until you cannot retrieve a trace when you desire it back.
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Saltwater left unwashed eats away holes in metal.
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And rage perpetually nourished eats irreversible holes in spirits.
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The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.



[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 06-21-2000).]

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minneouw
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 6

1 posted 2000-06-21 08:49 AM


strong words and powerful images. I liked this...
Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
2 posted 2000-06-22 03:12 PM


Wonderful story with wonderful images!  I liked this one a lot!

"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

jbouder
Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
3 posted 2000-06-22 08:17 PM


I enjoyed this, Rosemary.  Well worded.

Jim

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