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merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

0 posted 1999-11-13 03:02 AM

Sha-boom-la-boom

(Her)
Oh! I want to be so self indulged.
What you talking about?
You idot!
Now run along?

(Her)
Mama's go-na bake cookies.
Daddy's going to...
Stay home!

(Her)
What you mean I have to go to my room?
Daddy's not going to work!
No cookies for me today?
Now run along!

(Her)
Just wait until I have kids.
I'll stay home.
That's right.
Let them go to work.

(Her)
What you mean I'll starve?
Look!
Me without no baked goods.
Just wait until I get rich
I'll throw you out in the street!

(Her)
You'll make the cookies?
Right after you bury me?
Maybe going to my room,
Isn't such a bad thing.

(Her)
I'll go
But you haven't heard the last of me.
You'll do what with your foot?
All right I'm going!

(Her)
I know what they're up to.
Think I don't know.
Make a little brother.
Give him everything.

(Her)
Children! You let them have a friend over.
And they think they're the adults
It's not my fault.
My daddy raised an idot.

(Her little daughter)
"Mommy wake up!"
"Wake up."
"You dreaming again."

(Her)
Yes it was wonderful.
Your only three?
What happen to your husband?
Oh my god, I have to work.

(Her Husband)
"Relax Sweetheart it's Sunday"
"Oh my god tomorrow I have to work"
"A hole week!"

(Her)
You don't work any more.
Don't you remember?
Your staying home and watch the children.
Isn't life a dream?

Copyrighted By little old me.
Merlyn Hearn. 1999

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 1999-11-13 01:56 PM

This was very interesting dialogue. I was a little confused with the "hers" in the beginning. Liked it!

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-13 04:04 PM

You have such an amazing imagination. I could never write like this. Great job.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-11-14 02:28 AM

I really liked this, though I too was a bit confused by all the she's.....I think I got the general gist of it...nicely done.

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Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 1999-11-21 04:45 AM

Merlyn, you have one of the most distinct, interesting styles I have ever read. It is certainly difficult to keep up with sometimes, but usually worth the effort!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-11-21 09:46 AM

Giggles Merlynh,You have unique style.

I always enjoy reading your work!

Jenny Lee

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

6 posted 1999-11-21 05:35 PM

Thank you, I'll post some more.

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