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mystical_whisper
New Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 2


0 posted 1999-11-10 06:41 PM


I've never looked into his eyes or touched
his hand or kissed his lips.
I've never heard his heart beating for me as
mine beats for him.
I've never seen his smile or smelled his
cologne.
But still after all of this I love him,
I love him more than he will ever know.
It's hard to explain the way I feel.
I've never felt a love like this before,
never imagined it even existed.
It's the kind of love one reads about in
fairy tales, a Romeo and Juliet kind of
love.
A love that is as painful as it is blissful.
A love that will never fully blossom and
grow.
But a love that will forever be in my heart
and visit me often in my dreams.
Like a fairy tale he is my Knight in shinning
armor and I am his Princess always and
forever.

© Copyright 1999 mystical_whisper - All Rights Reserved
Amy J. Renz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26
Newark, NJ, USA
1 posted 1999-11-10 08:01 PM


MW,
I know exactly how you feel, as I am one and the same. Lovely story, almost a poem. I like the line, "A love that is as painful as it is blissful." How true. Keep on writing, you do a wonderful job!

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angelrocket
Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 12
Salt Lake City, Utah USA
2 posted 1999-11-15 01:50 AM


Mystical, you say things in ways that I could not...it is beautiful!
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-21 09:48 AM


Ahhhh fairy-tale love
I enjoyed this one alot


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
4 posted 1999-12-06 11:23 PM


Sweet little story, much enjoyed!  Thanks for a wonderful post  

 "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"


Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-12-07 12:21 PM


Welcome to Passions Mystic!
Thank you for shaing your story...a love many dream of, but few find!

Terrina Kethryveris
Member
since 1999-12-06
Posts 53
USA
6 posted 1999-12-07 01:04 AM


I have experienced love such as this, but alas only in my dreams doth it exist. *sigh* Oh that my dreams come true someday, but until then I wait.

Wonderful story indeed.  

Terri

 Truth be known, fantasy is much more appealing than reality.

Ruby dagger
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76
Wyoming, MN, U.S.A
7 posted 1999-12-08 09:43 PM


Really sweet story, just remeber that there is always hope.  

 Luv ya

Kelly

I'm no different than the average girl, my dreams wrap around the world. -Rebecca Lynn Howard

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