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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
Always and Forever he told her. That's how long their love would last. Little did Mirella know that that was the last day she would see her knight in shining armor, Sir Vincent. Sir Vincent left with the army of knights after saying his last good bye to Mirella. At war Sir Vincent stepped onto the battle field with his fellow knights. Looking at the savages that think they own the world. They charged. Vincent took the lead. The first men his sword came in contact with lost their heads. The next couple of men were sliced open from their gut to their shoulder to let all of their entrails fall out. He took out his dagger and sliced a few throats. One of the unharmed men came up behind Sir Vincent with a club and knocked him unconcience off his horse. Sir Vincent woke up to see a beautiful face watching over him. "Hello, how are you feeling?" she said in a sweet voice. "Owe, my head hurts. Where am I? Where's Mirella?" He said while making an attempt to get up. "No you don't. Stay put until your wounds heal. You're at my house cause you were the only living man on the field. By the way my name is Adonia. what's yours?" She said looking very beautiful. "I am Sir Vincent. I am honored to be Healed by a beauty like yourself." he said while he kissed her hand. "Thank you Sir Vincent. I am honored to have such a noble knight in my care. Who is Mirella?" "Oh, she's my sister." He lied so he could get to know Adonia better. "Mabey I should send word to her that you are still alive so she will not worry." "No that's ok. She will always believe that I will live and come home." -I better stick to my story. Adonia is so beautiful. How can I ever take my eyes off of her? Last time I felt like this was with Mir, Mir.... Oh I forgot her name- "I should stay until my wounds are healed anyway." So Sir Vincent stayed at Adonia's house until he was healed. Adonia asked Sir Vincent more about his homeland, family, and what he's done in his life. There were other people in the Village who came to see how the knight was doing. But one day Adonia wrote a letter to Mirella, Vicent's so called sister. She gave it to one of the villagers to get it to her. Later... "A letter for you M'lady." a servant said as she came into the sitting room of Mirlella. "Thank you," she said while taking the note. she opened it and read it. The note read: Dear Mirella, You do not know me, but right now I am taking care of Sir Vincent's wounds from the battle that had taken place near my house. As he has told me, you are his sister. Right now he can't even remember your name. Since he forgot your name I had suspicions of his being your brother. Have the measenger lead you back to this Village so you may see your "brother" again. Sincerely, Adonia Mirella took the letter and ripped it up. Then she went around the room breaking everything in sight. The servent came back into the room so see what was happening. "Go get the person who delivered this message to me!" the servent looked scared at her. "NOW!" and she scurried out of the room. Mirella got dressed in long pants, a loose fitting shirt, and hair braided back. The deliverer showed her the village and the house which the "Hero" was staying in. Adonia just came out of the door. "Are you Adonia?" she said with and icy voice. "Yes I am. Are you Mirella?" "Yes, I was Sir Vincent's Bride-to-be. He says his love was Always and Forever. That lasted long." she said never taking the cold icy stare off of the woman who stole her love's heart. "Oh dear, No! Well, he's healed now. Would you like to have some help hurting him?" she said excitedly. "Sure come on. Let's go see the hero" Then they walked into the little home. "Hello there Hansome. Do you remember me?" He sat up and started to stutter when he saw the stern faces of the woman he used to love and the one he loved now. The women smacked him, kicked him, hit him, and did unspeakable things to him. Amazenly they felt a lot better afterwards. Of course Vincent didn't. "Would you like to come live in my house? Become a lady in court?" Mirella asked Adonia. "Thank you. Are we in any hurry to get back to your manor? "Not at all." And they had a wonderful life breaking mens hearts. ------------------ Luv ya Kelly [This message has been edited by Ruby dagger (edited 08-01-99).] [This message has been edited by Ruby dagger (edited 08-01-99).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I like this story, Kell. Just a couple of spelling errors, I could point those out if you wish. Great work, as are all you have shared with your darling best friend here. Keep it up!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
There, all spelling errors fixed. Thanks Krista. ------------------ Luv ya Kelly |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Welcome to Passions in Prose. Very good storyline, excellent work, I look forward to seeing more of you here. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
If only more women banded together like this.It might make men a little more sensitive.Well done! ------------------ "There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart" |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Cool story Kell, I have to say the guy got what he deserved, I can't wait for you to post more work for the rest to see. ------------------ "I'm down in a hole, and I don't know if I can be saved. See my heart? I've decorated it like a grave." - Alice in Chains |
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