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Sage Spirit Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 19Derry, NH USA |
Come down from your world sit with mine for a while relax your soul Watch as the wind slows to enjoy your space while the sun stretches its rays to reach your face you light peoples eyes see the glow Are you one of the same in your homeland? Or a masterpiece everywhere you turn? You are out of this world my cosmic friend Oh say did you see by the orange sunlight that sweet soul a shinin like a dream singing sweet songs about our healing your sweet face surrounded by the comfort of purple mist and clover I cannot resist.. Inspired by LKravitz |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Welcome to Passions in Prose!  Nice work and flow, but reminiscent of free verse somewhat in form. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Welcome from me as well. I agree, (as is quite common,) with DE. You should consider asking him to move this over to the open forum. Well done! |
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