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Lolita
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America

0 posted 1999-11-10 08:19 AM


when the still sea conspires and armour
and her sullen and aborted currents breed tiny monsters
true sailing is dead...

I have forgotten the rest.

The night was young and full of rest
I can't describe the way she dressed
she'll pander to some strange request
anything that you suggest
Anything to please her guest

Have you guessed it yet?

© Copyright 1999 Lolita - All Rights Reserved
roxane
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-11-10 01:30 PM


i liked it, whoever's it was
Brad
Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
2 posted 1999-11-11 05:40 AM


I don't have the faintest idea who it is but I think it's absolutely hilarious the way it's presented.
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