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Alain DeLaCendres Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119Ohio |
My heart is a steady stream as it flows from my chest down my finger tips and into the awaiting goblet. Raise the cup to your clear crystal lips my sweet, and drink long and deep. Drink and tell me what you taste, for the elixir you intake has no hint of color. You wanted inside my heart sweet one, but as you truly find what I hold inside; Ask yourself something, do you still want me? I have no answers for you wonderful one, For my heart is beyond empty and the tainted fluid you now taste doesn’t even feel as if it belongs to me anymore. You wanted me, now you know what to expect so please, I beg you, taste long and deep; Because I have no answers about me for you or myself. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I really loved the line, "... my heart is beyond empty". I'm going to have to read this one a couple of times, Alain, to see if I've really got it. Somehow, I think you're tyring to poison your lover and be done with it. Am I right? -dp |
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Alain DeLaCendres Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119Ohio |
Well, I guess I was trying to say that I wasn't what the "lover" thought I was, and that she should look deeper becuase what was really inside might poison her. So, yeah, poison is right. Thanks doreen. ------------------ Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie. |
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