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Romancing To The Stone

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

0 posted 1999-10-08 07:56 PM

Romancing To The Stone

Oh my love none can compare.
Thou skin is so smooth.
But alas it is so cold.

I know they say your just a rock
That my head maybe full of stones.

If I hit you upon my head.
Does it not bleed?

Kiss me. Yes. Yes, deeply.
Air, I can't breath....
Cough.

Am not crazy.
I'll show the world.

Prehaps the romace is gone.
But I'll still make a buck.

So from romancing to the stone.
It simply became a pet.
You know the rest of the story.

Copyrighted 1999 by Merlyn Hearn

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

1 posted 1999-10-08 08:02 PM

"Wow! Man you can write. Wow."
"Thank you. Thank you."
Well at least I got a reply for this mockery. Ha, ha.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 1999-10-08 08:51 PM

LOL!!!

You're a NUT!

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