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Feel the warmth

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-27 03:25 AM

well joel the wolf said i should post this one here so here it is.

Feel the warmth before you die
            To
   Show the young children
           With
      Fruitful eye's
  There's more to living
          Then
       Just to die

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-06-27 03:34 AM

then=than??

other than that I think it is really good.
Although it does make me wonder.."the warmth" or "some warmth" or is a specific kind as in the warmth of love..of friendship,, of living in general,,the warmth gained from sharing??

I know it is up to each of us to decide for themselves,, Just curious as to the authors intent.

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-06-27 03:41 AM

thanks for your reply and the warmth was meant to be living in general. and once again thanks

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

mysticharm
Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 189
Canada

3 posted 2000-06-27 01:20 PM

Hi Jeremiah

You have definitely said a mouthful in just a few words...short, with a powerful meaning.

I like it

Is this your real name or are you a robert redford fan?

Never underestimate the Power of Purpose.
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is a mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the 'Present'
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