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Goodbye Love |
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scatter283 New Member
since 2000-06-20
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This tear for you This tear for me This one is for the two of us This tear for the memories This tear for the moments This one for our love Forever gone Is the romance we shared The romance we thought we needed Never to see each other again we now must move on But always remember the love we had together the love we thought would never end |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Welcome to Passions and CA!! Um, are you sure you want to post this here? I think this poem would get a stronger reception in the General poetry forum but this all up to you of course. Could you drop me a note (here or e-mail) and let me know if you are actively looking for criticism or just weren't sure where to post this? I'd appreciate it greatly. Thanks, Brad |
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