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MelBear Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29Imlay City, Mi |
Hey everyone.. I thought it would be fun to see how we could all make a poem.. so add a line or two and lets see what we get! Mel If you look into my eyes you see pain. If you look into my chest you see heart that no one can tame. "Death is not the end. Just a vaction (where you acan still see the world)from friends and family, in time they all follow you to your permanet vacation spot." |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Nice idea, Melbear...a poem written by everyone... "If you look into my eyes you see pain. If you look into my chest you see heart that no one can tame," Though you could very well be the one who Could add colors to that which is now only blue I hope there are a lot of contributors... Kristine< !signature--> the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare [This message has been edited by warmhrt (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
ok, here goes. (sound of cutting and pasting) If you look into my eyes you see pain. If you look into my chest you see heart that no one can tame, Though you could very well be the one who Could add colors to that which is now only blue Listen, love, listen your memory is stored in my body, in my tissues and every thing that you do [This message has been edited by bboog (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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