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Open Poetry #51
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Elgordo
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since 2021-07-29
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0 posted 2021-08-10 12:23 PM


Sat down with a haughty hombre,
Whom was reknown both far and wide,
As a salted bloooded brother,
Of those men who like to ride,

As a fellow of the colours,
The rules are close to heart,
Swiftly they have been broken,
Torn asunder, ripped apart,

Disharmony and discordance,
A ripple throughout the lake,
Ichor upon still waters,
Cummuponce for his mistake...
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Divine Paradox
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since 2021-08-03
Posts 44
I'm not from here.
1 posted 2021-08-13 09:15 AM

Serious wow. This is vivid and commands attention.Such a concise and poetic way to portray this horrendous event. This is good.

SG
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