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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-12-04 12:24 PM


I remember how the cool glow of the moon reflected off the wetness of your body
and into these eyes like the millions of stars that surrounded that warm summers' night

The firmness in my loins was never greater than when you first drew me
to your anxious lips and I felt myself pouring into you with a shudder
that preceded the kaleidoscope of color that I continue to experience
...with each passing thought of you

I still can feel your soft hand moving across my chest as your moist tongue
floated over my ear and you whispered perfumed words of invitation
to passions and love that I could never resist in those captive moments

I’ll love you forever and always, my darling
Sleep well, my love, until we meet once more
...never to be parted again


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-12-04 05:05 AM


Wow Bluesy! Got some steamy stuff going on in this very loving poem. It's a winner in my book. ~L
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2017-12-04 04:46 PM


what a love poem, just wonderful, amazing


yann

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2017-12-05 01:30 AM


Many thanks, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2017-12-05 01:32 AM


I appreciate your comments, yann.

Merci beaucoup...

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-12-05 06:00 PM


Your passionate pen calls to the romantic in us all ~ A sigh worthy piece through and through   Much enjoyed Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
6 posted 2017-12-06 12:16 PM


Thank you so much for your warm compliments, Miss Pinky. They'll linger for a long time.

...just bein' Bluesy

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