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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2017-02-08 10:11 AM



Forgotten Thursdays hid amongst the days,

Not beginning, not end nor even midst,

Twenty four hours of lingering malaise

Existing only in minds of man, didst

Know thee not thy purposeless existence

Is but an illusion, without meaning

One earth’s revolution sans subsistence?

Thorsdagr we seek not to find thy being

For thy being is but a fantasy,

Myths long forgotten by mortal being.

What then we ask, is our reality?

Tis remnants of humanity’s fleeing.

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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2017-02-11 10:08 AM


Your title had me counting my fingers to see where Thursday is hidden, not the beginning, midst, or end of the week. You're right there, this is an original thought to capture describing the day.

It tickles my mind to think of a poem to write on the other days. Thanks for the thoughts..

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2017-02-16 04:29 PM


enjoyed...james
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