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Poetic Perfection |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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stilted rhyme jerks haphazardly like soldiers marching out of cadence or calm accosted by tumultuous chaos passion consumed by practiced perfection dancing to an impeccable waltz of words sanitized in sincere superiority alison |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This resonates. Hugs ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A "dance" known in certain circles, not as a "waltz"...but rather; "The Route Step Rumba". It takes about 150 'out of step' jarheads to get it right. Your poetry set me to thinkin' about such things, Alison. I don't know whether to thank you or throw something at you!  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Nice alliteration! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very clever, Alison. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Once more enjoyed... ...just bein' Bluesy |
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