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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-01-13 11:16 PM



To superficial thinkers we are not at war,
Daily life not altered a lot,
Some shop chic boutiques for naught,
For plebeians Wal Mart is the store.

A vague calm is o'er the home front,
Nightly television images assault our eyes,
Fallujah overrun again, Marines die,
Can see, hear, cursing of the grunts.

America yawns and file their nails,
Goes to the lounge,
See what can be found,
Brings home a blind lover, ooh, he knows Braille.

Talk of war, talk of peace,
Who is right,
Who is wrong, go fly a kite,
We really care not, watching the press release.

Except those of loved ones,
Crying for their dead,
A brother, a father, whose blood has bled,
From bullets from a gun.

Votes counted, new man won,
Hate speech liken him to a vile despot,
Accuses him of dastardly, dreadful plots,
Think from Lucifer he was spawned.

Evil came to us unnatural and vile,
Turmoil, hate and revenge we had a need,
To go after this nefarious breed,
Find them, kill them, do it with style.

Ah, but now we have become carefree,
Our main concern has become a blur,
We forget how angry we were,
We drink our beer, or nibble our brie.

The anger we can't find,
Except directed at our new Commander-in-Chief,
We are as passive as a fallen leaf,
We walk around like the blind.

Dissenters of our policy about there and back,
Shrill voices we hear,
Condemning the fight of our volunteers,
Not realizing, if we don't fight, freedom will lack.

My lone voice says the fight is right,
Over there, please, not here for a second blow,
Root out evil where 'ere it is and make 'em go,
To their vestal virgins, not here for a new 9-11 bite.

©November 15, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2017-01-14 10:35 AM


thanks Jerry, the words are precious when they fight for freedom, yours have a weight above any politics "turmoil" ? this is a deep poem to share and read
yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2017-01-14 10:40 AM


Yes yann, "turmoil," is exactly the correct word to use about what is happening to America these days. Thank you for being here today and for your cool comments.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
3 posted 2017-01-15 03:59 AM


This would make one hell of an editorial Jerry. Great reading altogether and as for this:
quote:
"The anger we can't find, Except directed at our new Commander-in-Chief"
It's an interesting statement. Usually, it takes about a half an hour to break leather on a new president, you know, find out what makes him tick and than curse 'em! With Trump, everybody's shooting at him while he's still "elect". Maybe we'll all like him in a half-hour or so.

(I was smiling when I said that my friend!)  

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2017-01-15 09:11 AM


I'm a Trump man all the way.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2017-01-19 03:49 PM


nice to read...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
6 posted 2017-01-20 03:22 AM


The times are still a-changin', as they always will. Let's hope some good will come out of this new cycle of leadership.

...just bein' Bluesy

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