Open Poetry #50 |
A Poet I Am Not |
The Lost Lenore New Member
since 2012-01-16
Posts 4 |
Im bad at writing poetry This I can attest I have no idea how to form a verse Or know what a stanza is Someone told me once Rhyming is the way But if you have a word like purple Nothing rhymes with that To wrack my brain in pondering How to write the best I need to open a thasaurus Will I even past this test? Poetry is not my forte English was my worst I do remeber some things tho Like refrain, trochee and verse I guess I have figured out the verse part That was simple enough But other things like foot or quatrain I have no idea as I was out sick that day So here I am trying my hand At something I fear will be bad I wrote this in less than ten minutes For a bad poetry contest my work place had. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Oh, but you are 'Lenore'...and a right fine one at that! BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I, too, think you did quite well, my friend . . . you definitely rhyme much better than I, since I can't rhyme anything at all! by the way ... "thasaurus" should be "thesaurus" I believe. j. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Rhyme If you write a poem The words you have to find You had best be knowing An orange has a rind Plums are nice when tender I prefer them purple Then you may remember Purple rhymes with Turtle Best wishes Michael |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
humility is good for poetry, for oneself and for others, i consider your poem so, with respect, (i don't care a lot for rhymes),i Feel a good sharing here yann |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Definitely nothing wrong with your writing Poet Pleased to meet you ~ Keep smiling and writing ~ Alana |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You are a poet after my own heart writing about not being able to write and producing a delightful poem. I sense you may be full of whimsy, in which case I can't wait to read what you have next in mind. You were a great read! ~L |
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