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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-07-10 09:05 PM




Would It be Easy or Hard


The bamboo forest was beckoning me, beckoning me
and there was no way I could ignore the call
neither could she,  neither could she;
it was on one Sunday morning,
when she called me with no warning
and I couldn't ignore the call,
in a flash I started my old pick-up truck
I had been desperately missing her, what luck,
I turned off the main road,
drove until I passed the sugar shack
in just a few moments I would be there
she would be hiding in the bamboo forest
somewhere near to where the tall bamboo starts,
now I just had to find her;
that was the interesting part.


JamesLee
7/10/17


  

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-07-10 10:01 PM


Ahhh . . . The interesting part, in my way of thinking would be when you found her.

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AngelofLight
Junior Member
Posts 14
Florida,USA
2 posted 2017-07-11 02:46 AM


I bet I know what would happen once you found her. My mind went into the gutter for a minute. LOL Anyways, I enjoyed the read. 😉
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2017-07-11 12:05 PM


Now THAT i WOULD SAY IS LOVE'S SWEET CALL--NOW GO FLY TO HER. DON'T YOU TARRY NOW
Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
4 posted 2017-07-18 12:35 PM


James ~ Sounds like a fun and romantic game of hide and seek Nicely penned... Alana
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