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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-06-20 05:48 AM



If you don’t change your ways
you’re going straight to hell
or jail.
You are going to get AIDS
or the Herpes.
If you don’t change your ways
you’re going to get Cancer
or Diabetes.
You are going to have a heart attack
or a stroke.
If you don’t change your ways
you’re going to get fat
and ugly.
You are going to die all alone
and poor.
If you do change your ways
you’re going to get hit by a bus
or lightening.
You are going to drown in your soup
or champagne.
So let this be a word to the wise
about changing your ways
for whatever reasons why.
No matter how well intended
our reasons for change,
in the end we still die.
So in your changes and rearranges
remember to be happy
as you attempt to make
your life last longer.
It should make your smile stronger.
And don’t worry about
the destination to your journey,
we never know when we’ll get there
anyway.
Every day is a new roll of the dice,
so remember to always play nice.


© Copyright 2017 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-06-20 08:33 AM


Last line says it all.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-06-20 12:11 PM


yep
jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2017-06-21 09:11 AM


very wise advice..life goes on steadily to the end, changes or not.
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2017-06-21 05:32 PM


Giggles, Lori - fun and wise!
Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
5 posted 2017-06-22 10:19 PM


Seems like I have heard these things before some where....lol  Great message and definitely play nice....Well ~ Most the time anywho!  ha ha  Thankies Lori Samorie   Alana
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2017-06-23 05:39 PM


Right on my friend!

And I'm here to tell you - in the end...<\i>
I'm gonna fight that "dying" thing to the last vestiges of the quarter I paid for this game!

j.

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