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Gunslinger
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0 posted 2020-09-05 03:52 PM



A travesty is what I’d call-
The mess my life’s become.
I have to wonder how it is-
I’ve got from where I’ve come.

There was a time I laughed a lot-
And smiled quite often, too.
But now my life somehow becomes
A bluer shade of blue.

I’ve always cherished music-
And often had the urge-
To sing of life and sunshine-
My song’s become a dirge.

Friends and family have I none-
The good thing, I suppose-
Is not that I am so alone-
But I outlived all my foes.

I’ve yet one foe to face, I guess-
Ere I draw my last breath…
And he may prove to be a friend-
I speak of course of Death.

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augustsky
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1 posted 2020-09-06 11:13 PM


I'd have to say Whoa..you're too young to go,
& your rhyme is much better than mine.


Sky~

~ Cherish Everything ~

Michael
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2 posted 2020-09-08 07:37 PM


Death is a lot like me I've come to realize.  Wanders around a lot, often alone, and puts in way too many hours.  We should treat him to a drink me thinks...bets he has lots of fascinating tales he could share with us... and I do not believe him an enemy.

Michael

Gunslinger
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3 posted 2020-09-08 08:58 PM


Ditto, Michael
Forlorn Angel
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4 posted 2020-09-09 11:27 PM


I can relate. As in every crisis there is a friend and a foe, when the time comes  no one knows?


Paul Wilson
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5 posted 2020-09-10 08:29 PM


John...Get back on that damn horse you rode most of your life and hold on for all its worth. You got many more rodeo's to go to. Take care my friend...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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