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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2020-07-20 08:00 PM



My imagination dances
on a tightrope,
high above the crowd,
amid the twinkling lights
of wonder.
My balance pole
is intuition,
my strength
poetic vision.
I must not look down.

              Ida Werrett


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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2020-07-21 12:12 PM


But looking down allows you to 'see the world' my friend - of course it may also cause dizziness and cause you to not just 'see' but to 'blend' with the world. . .


much enjoyed...

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2020-07-21 04:06 PM


pretty good, Ida, poetic vision is esential , looking down is dangerous, loved your words and images
yann

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2020-07-21 09:55 PM


"My balance pole
is intuition,"

I have spent some time up there.  

My two cents:  the twinkling lights of wonder are worth any fall.


Michael

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2020-07-22 04:49 AM


Thank you, Poets.

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
5 posted 2020-07-25 10:09 PM


My sanity does this. LOL!

Seriously. I love this.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2020-07-26 02:18 AM


Thank you, Temptress.
Starmcneil 1955
Member
Posts 174
Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2020-07-26 02:43 PM


WOW!!! so few words to say so much...beautiful
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2020-07-26 09:26 PM


Thank you, Srarmcneil.

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