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WindWalker12
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since 2009-10-17
Posts 57


0 posted 2020-05-15 02:35 AM


Problems;
life's full of them
they arise, no warning.
Time for the great search,
of mind, that is,
and how to do that?

Let's see,
a walk by the sea
away from the city's endless cacophony:
sounds good, I mean healthy, really
but sound is sound
and those thundering waves,
rushing up the rocky shore crashing
then sucking their drool after:
very distracting.

I sit long, pondering
on cold, wet log
deposited here, half buried
during a winter's storm,
and I watch those green waves roll in,
crash and rumble,
swish back, foam following.

It's just more noise, I think
but there seems to be a Voice
in this timeless tumult,
a specific set of words, a message?
Perhaps, yes,
and having accepted such possibility
I can hear it now.

“You can't get away to someplace
or somewhere special
to do mind searching.
Nor is there a special time:
it all takes place inside the mind,
inside you,
and it all takes place
all of the time. Are you listening?


As long as outside influences distract you,
you will never know your mind,
never discover the real you,
the one born to become
not just to be or to exist.”

It does not matter now what they say,
I know, like it or not,
that mind queries
are part of every moment
and every moment becomes a treasure.


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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2020-05-16 06:37 PM


This really does take me to the physical and mental place in my head. Now I don't think I'll ever be able to get the picture of drool sucking waves out of my head. I've never heard it described this way. I love it.

"Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me"

Jewel

Starmcneil 1955
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Posts 174
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2020-07-26 03:06 PM


And every word becomes a poem with visions both hard and soft...loved the imagery
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