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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2019-08-30 11:47 PM



I'm day dreaming again
hand on my chin.
Staring out the
classroom window
at the forest
and the orchard
across the street
where I would rather be
than in this seat.
But I am confined
to the classroom
on this lovely spring day.
So...I'm day dreaming again,
following my wild heart
far and away
until a tap on my head
from Mrs. Johnson's pencil
reminds me that...
I'm day dreaming again.

              Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2019 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2019-08-31 03:11 AM


Ida, This brought a smile to my face
so much more fun to daydream..

Nicely done..
Sky~

A Poem Begins as a
Lump in the Throat,
A Sense of Wrong,
A Home-Sickness,
A Love-Sickness.


~Robert Frost

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2019-08-31 07:07 AM


such elegant memories of school, the scene is awesome, the poetry Works perfectly
yann

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2019-08-31 12:06 PM


Ida...Keep on day dreaming my friend, that's how masterpieces come to life. Thanks for sharing this soft gentle daydream with us...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2019-08-31 09:44 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments. I so enjoy your input.

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

5 posted 2019-08-31 10:16 PM


Ida - Daydreams....it's what poets are made of. Thanks for reminding us and I definitely enjoyed it. Namyh
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2019-09-02 02:49 AM


Thank you, Nymyh.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2019-09-02 02:51 AM


Thank you, Namyh.

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
8 posted 2019-09-03 08:42 PM


Pleasure to read your poems, Ida! Reminds me of my school days and history classes!
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2019-09-04 01:25 AM


Thank you, Prasad.

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