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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Long weekends of treats and dreams, champagne scenes, crafted empty promises theatrically disguised as sighs and gentle whispers, intermittent rhythmic screams, passions' lies fading in harsh daylight's sting, raw wrath's cold aftermath; talons of memory ripping shreds of credibility, slashing certainty to bloodied bits in threads and shreds of shattered hopes, until ache squeezed silent tears on bits of scattered fears washed onto un-lived years, in piles of detritus dried on ebb line's waning tides. Do you remember when the music stopped? © 2019 by icebox |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Ice, An emotional sting this was indeed.. 'talons of memory'..really like that metaphor. well written Poet Sky~ A Poem Begins as a |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I remember well. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes, I do. |
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