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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Born from a thought, nurtured by an imagination, evolving into a dream Still, in all her affection and beauty, she lays beyond my reach... but she never knows that Sometimes she waits on me and smiles an unsuspecting smile And then there are times when she gives so much of herself to me, comforting my many ails, yet never once realizing how distant she is If the ink never fades, she’ll live forever, long after this heart of mine has died Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
PU, "If the ink never fades, she’ll live forever, long after this heart of mine has died" This is wonderfully romantic! Loved this! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I couldn't agree with Lori anymore. That phrase is to die for. Ahhh . . . The rest of the poem kicks ass also. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you so much Lori Rhoden for finding romanticism in my poem. Your comments are always a delight. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Many thanks to you Mr. Bolton for your "kick-ass" reply! I appreciate your visit immensely! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is lovely and creative, lets imagination works, Love can creates good poetry yann |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you yann. You're very kind.  Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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