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P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 2017-04-03 01:03 PM


I see the waters that sparkle so blue,
as they rest in your eyes so refreshing and new
I feel the softness of clouds from above,
that envelope your body in a shroud of love

I smell the freshness of dew in your hair,
the warm rose color of your skin so fair
I hear the birds singing as they pass over your crib
just as the birds in Jesus' day did

You are my wonder, a miracle come true
My labor of love, I extend all to you
A new world awaits you, but for now you can rest
and watch the sun grapple with the moon for who's best!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-04-03 03:54 PM


PU! How wonderful! What a sweet, sweet poem!
Absolutely love it! ~L

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 2017-04-03 04:06 PM


Thank you so very much Lori Rhoden! What they grow to be one can never say, but newborns and infants reflect nothing but goodness and beauty.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2017-04-03 09:18 PM


I agree with Lori, this is a masterful cool write.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 2017-04-04 12:02 PM


Thank you for your compliment JerryPat2. I very much appreciate your thoughts.

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2islander2
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5 posted 2017-04-04 12:57 PM


so sweet declaration, words are music,


yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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6 posted 2017-04-04 01:26 PM


Thank you yann!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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