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augustsky
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0 posted 2019-01-09 05:40 PM





Somewhere~

Am I a dappled shadow
Somewhere
in the small corner
of your heart..
In those days of wine and roses,
sunrise rapture,
and midnight milkings
that spilled the sky.


Do you feel strands
of soft hair
dangle to your chest,
remember the scent
of my perfume
as I lowered
to catch your mouth..
does the warm ghost
of my embrace still linger
upon your skin..


In the misty hours of slumber,
before the present claims you,
does my name escape your lips..
can you fathom the aura of love
that once surrounded you?


Somewhere..
in the stillness,
a sob softly echoes,
and in your hazy waking
you'll realize it came
from your own throat,
your hand slides across
the cool white pillowcase,
but I'm not there.

©Augustsky

[This message has been edited by augustsky (01-09-2019 11:29 PM).]

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2019-01-09 08:07 PM


quote:
"your hand slides across
the cool white pillowcase,
but I'm
not there"
Hmm...I wonder who it could have been.

...just bein' Bluesy

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2019-01-09 09:48 PM


Hmmm...Cheeky

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2019-01-10 05:31 AM


Sky,
I think this is wonderful. It says so much about you and the fool that let you go. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2019-01-11 04:08 PM


Ahhh . . . Perfecto! My friend, loved every wonderful line of this one.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
5 posted 2019-01-11 06:47 PM


L. Thank you for always being supportive
to my writes. This was quite some time ago.

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
6 posted 2019-01-11 06:49 PM


Jerrypat, Thanks for being a good Poet-friend. Pleased you liked.

Augustsky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

7 posted 2019-01-14 12:32 PM


Sky - Men! We can be the biggest fools sometimes and know with guilt that we are. Thanks for the "somewhere" reminder. Very nice work Sky. Namyh
Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
8 posted 2019-01-14 02:11 PM


Dear Sky this speaks ever so softly to my heart of hearts ~ I've wondered these same thoughts from days gone by. A touching read ~ Thanks for sharing
Hugz
Alana

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
9 posted 2019-01-15 08:42 PM


Oh..Namyh, what a sweet response..Thank you.

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
10 posted 2019-01-15 08:44 PM


One of those things we can all relate to
I guess.

Thanks Alana..

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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