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P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 2017-03-25 04:20 PM


So you think you’ve got the mettle
to walk a mile in Mr. Bolton’s shoes
Well, maybe ya have and maybe ya haven’t
But ya better like the blues

So go ahead friend, sit yourself down
Let me lace you up good and tight
These ain’t no ‘penny loafers’ ya know
Ya gotta be ready to fight

If your trail leads to a mean street
Buddy, you’re on your own
If your trail leads to a ‘sweet treat’
Buddy, bring her home


Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

[This message has been edited by P.U Stinkenbaum (03-25-2017 06:22 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2017-03-25 06:38 PM


I believe you nailed it! ~L

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 2017-03-25 07:16 PM


Thanks Lori Rhoden! That explains why my hand is so sore...I should have used a pencil.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2017-03-26 09:26 PM


Aw jp..you're a stinker.  😉
2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2017-03-26 10:18 PM


that's sounds a good lesson, for me, like a track for running better, smiling mood,
thanks


yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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5 posted 2017-03-27 12:30 PM


Thanks Blues...but did you have to show up wearing that mask?

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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6 posted 2017-03-27 12:34 PM


Heh...Never thought of it that way yann. Thanks for your visit and your comment.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2017-03-30 02:15 PM


Eh . . . I could say something, but dang me I have nothing worthwhile to say. So . . . Oh! I actually posted the Blues poem before I read this. For real.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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8 posted 2017-03-30 09:40 PM


Just to have you make an appearance is an honor sir! Thanks!

(Oh, by the way...don't pay much attention to BluesSerenade Mr. Bolton, she thought you were me! )


Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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