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Open Poetry #50
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kevinjtaylor
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Posts 61
British Columbia, Canada
0 posted 2018-11-22 08:19 AM

main street underworld
where belts are hung with halos of the souls
they say they've stolen
their t-shirts taunting— PROPERTY OF HIM
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augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2018-11-23 08:01 PM

K, I'm not sure what metaphor was intended
here, but this definitely ran a Chill up my
spine.


Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~
kevinjtaylor
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British Columbia, Canada
2 posted 2018-11-24 12:19 PM

augustsky... Allegory / metaphor and where a chill is a chill. Glad you got it.
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