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Sweet Dreams
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Sweet Dreams |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
The lightning streaks down I don my gown Then jump under the covers Through wind and the rain Calmness regains As I drift sleep discovers Sweet dreams of slumber Rain and thunder Shaggy dog running to me Golden butterfly I don't know why Both scurrying up a tree They laugh and they play Loving their day Singing and dancing away Dog and butterfly Both are thigh high Twirling as in a ballet The night it does come Playtime is done A kiss and a hug goodnight I breathe in and out Tossing about Wait for sweet dreams to ignite |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Clever and cute Wanda. Good flow and I enjoyed your continuity. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....wonderful flow...james |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Good for you, you can slumber on, despite the thunder, storm and rains. I can too, just go under covers and sweet dreams will take hold. A very soothing poem, rocks me to sleep with a smile on my face |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
so sweet, loved the whimsical imagery in this  |
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