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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2018-03-19 08:56 PM




Right on Time

I remember the tenderness in your kiss
I remember the softness of her lips;
as you kissed me
your lips melted into mine,
a blending of our lips
that I cannot forget,
a kiss that was sweet and refined
a kiss well given right on time
a treasure both yours and mine.

JamesLee
3/19/2018


  

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 2018-03-19 09:52 PM


...sweet

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2018-03-20 05:41 AM


ditto! ~L
Poet In Pink
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3 posted 2018-03-26 06:30 PM


Kisses like you've described are never forgotten ~ Tenderly penned James ~ Enjoyed   Alana
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2018-03-28 10:01 PM


Thank you Bluesy, Lori and Poet in Pink for responding...James
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