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Touchstones. |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Touchstones. I sense your discomfort But you are too precious not to know Take my hands to your cheeks There, soft like butterfly wings ~ Hush now, no words I knew you were beautiful I see you Through fingertips ~ Can we find love? Not her poor sister sympathy That taste lies sour Upon my tongue ~ For I am complete Knowing nothing of sight It is not a darkened world What is dark? ~ I feel your smile Will you guide me? Will you take my hand? Forever |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Astounding poetry, Cari, truly excellent poem. You, in very simple words, (I understood each one) you lent your soul to one who needed it and you needed to give it to him. I loved this. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
pretty...james |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My father was blind, your poem is quite moving and touches deeply. Thanks for your words. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
nice romanticism. |
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