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SilentShadow
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since 2006-04-20
Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.

0 posted 2014-06-10 12:30 PM



I dreampt of you last night,
And though my bed was empty,
As though you were there,
Wrapped in my arms,
The weight of your head on my chest,
Your arm crossed my body,
Your leg crossed mine,
You raised your head,
Your crystal blue eyes locked to mine,
Your breath caressed my neck,
The scent of your essence filled me,
your body pressed into mine,
Your moist warmth permeated me,
As one our lips met,
The taste of you overtook me,
I felt us blend as we moved,
I felt the world fade around us,
As I awoke I felt the world creep back in,
I felt the tears come with the reality,
I am missing you,,,

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-06-10 01:17 PM


I can completely relate, SS. It is a heartbreaking reality coming out of a dream such as you described only to find yourself quite alone.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-06-10 09:12 PM


fine 'Romantic' write! ...

(I was particularly glad to see it done without rhyme!)

amk377
Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
3 posted 2014-06-13 03:51 AM


I know this feeling...no matter the reason(s) love ends, it hurts. Writing it all does help, at least a bit. Beautifully written even if incredibly sad...

"If you can dream it, you can achieve it"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2014-06-19 07:37 PM


fine writing...James
Southernfury
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Posts 5

5 posted 2015-07-23 10:24 AM


true love never ends, i like to think the pain is there to remind us that something so special is real and does exist. that love will always be yours.
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