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MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
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Lancashire England

0 posted 2014-06-03 08:42 AM



Rhythm of the Rhyme


Soon lost in time like the rhythm of the rhyme
Perfumed blooms of June its sky reflects the blue
Cool breeze to tease the confetti petals fine
Rushing waves on pebbles murmur words so true
Dappled fawn at dawn in shadow mists of time
The touch of moorland grass where once the curlew flew
For sundials does time stop if the sun won’t shine
Colours of the rainbow is each colour true
Trace of lips on crystal red like Bordeaux wine
Crimson sky at sunset days like these so few
Metronome of heartbeats planets all align
Stars in blackest velvet stars that shine for you
Slowly losing rhythm never losing time
Words of love repeated listen to the rhyme.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-06-03 10:03 PM


Lovely poem, each and every line could stand alone... and your ending was perfect.

Very nice ...

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
2 posted 2014-06-04 09:31 PM


Very romantic

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