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Open Poetry #49

the language between

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-06-02 09:19 AM

clear from the clutter
the rapture of sun
and blue shadow, conceived
on the silent language between
branch and warm breeze

as the Spring comes fullterm
then and there, inherently

I know
it has always been you

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (06-02-2014 12:27 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-06-02 09:29 AM

Last line, as usual, is the kicker. Enjoy reading your posts, Emma. Your style and thoughts are pleasing, although sometime sad, to the senses.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2014-06-02 08:15 PM

The things that we know even when we don't realize that we know...spring and . . .

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

3 posted 2014-06-03 05:14 AM

Some things, like spring, never die. Our winters can make us doubt, but with those first shoots we cannot deny the truth.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2014-06-07 09:49 AM

Oooooh ahhhh!! So beautiful!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2014-06-08 12:16 PM

EmmaRose,Another pearl from your pen.You write sad and lonely beautifully. Enjoyed, Jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2014-06-19 07:39 PM

so nice...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2014-06-24 03:13 PM

Well, Blues said it best!!
Nice, very nice!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2014-06-25 01:42 PM

Really lovely, EmmaRose. I hope that last line is a happy one.

Owl

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2014-06-25 05:47 PM

As always ... wonderful!

jimmy

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