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Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
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0 posted 2014-05-31 06:19 PM


Be vile, awhile, with wanton style
Revolt me with depravity
Play your odious charm with cute
Nefarious intensity
And then, I'll be your loverboy
Of cold contemptibility

Strut down to my neighbourhood
Breathe the rank vicinity
Spill your bile upon the lost
In their abject propinquity
For then, I'll be your loverboy
Shameless in their misery

As the torpid lurch to clear our path
We'll raise a sneer to victory
Tenebrous triumph shall bestow
Limp laurels to our mastery
Oh, then, I'll be your loverboy
Fashioned for posterity


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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2014-06-01 01:40 AM


nice declaration, verses are fine and should be rewarded, thanks for sharing


yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2014-06-01 09:14 PM


You're a good sport.  
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2014-06-02 09:03 AM


Unique write.
           Ida

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
4 posted 2014-06-02 08:17 PM


Nice snappy beat, made these words fun to read!
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