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Open Poetry #49

breaking the sky

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-05-29 08:01 PM

Something told me to look up
on this ordinary day
of industrial grey and redundant
catastrophies

when I felt it as the lone bird flew

and wondered if you felt it too

felt my love then
enter you.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (05-29-2014 08:36 PM).]

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2014-05-29 10:18 PM

simple ans telling.enjoyed Jo

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-05-29 11:15 PM

Oh boy, if only it was that easy. You've done it again.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

3 posted 2014-05-30 04:48 AM

Imagery is so good that it almost seems like a brief description of a painting. From industrial grey and redundant catastrophies to a lone bird and the transportation of love. Only the poetic mind, only the poetic mind.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2014-05-31 11:53 AM

Just so! Compelling imagery as always, dear EmmaRose. Magical.

Love,
Margherita

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