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wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
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VA

0 posted 2014-05-29 10:54 AM


I

hush
.
.
.
step light into a hidden room
underneath the slatted rails

the full moon
glows in captivity

knitted light beams
stranded with darken night sighs

peek out
from rifted dust ruffles

and I spy the luna lady
who waits

II

only
a most audacious muse
that fey & feisty one
would admit

to confess

she hid the moon
under her bed
for a night

not only once
but twice

III

sail on
silver lady
tucked away in
a hidden cradle
endless dreams

caught

in a captive tide
rocks and lulls
this moony lull-a-bye
and my muse dreams
on . . . and on

Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2014-05-29 01:53 PM


and your muse rocks!
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2014-05-29 03:36 PM


very inspired and lovely, loved it, like the moon


yann

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

3 posted 2014-05-30 05:41 AM


Wistful, Luna dreaming. Atmospheric and peaceful; soothing to read.
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2014-05-30 07:26 PM


I must say it seems that your muse has the right idea. I loved the structure and the flow of this as well as the words.
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