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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-05-27 06:43 PM



LovingSuzieKim

She has a nice smile
and perfect teeth
as well
its not just the smile
its the way
her face is animated
her eyes sparkling
sometimes she giggles
like she's a young girl
totally delighted
with her life,
she's not a girl
she's a woman
a woman that
seems to fit into
my arms perfectly
and now its me-
me enjoying the silky
pleaasures of this life,
me and her
enjoying a love
that breathes and survives
a love that is so
passionately alive...
if only she could
stay longer.

JamesLee
25May
2014


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-05-27 07:16 PM


No biggie, James, there is another one out there waiting for SuzieKim to take her leave of you.

~*~ The poor wish to be rich, the rich wish to be happy, the single wish to be married, and the married wish to be dead. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-05-27 09:43 PM


fine mix of reality and Romanticism !
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2014-05-28 01:43 AM


so romantic, don't let her go, words are touching and sweet,

thanks


yann



JamesMichael
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4 posted 2014-05-31 09:12 PM


thank you Jerry, secondhanddreampoet and 2islander2 for the nice responses...James
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