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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-03-23 08:07 AM




I mention
cheap California burgundy
quite often in my poems
why do I drink the wine?
it doesn’t help me write poetry
no . . .
it helps me come down
from writing poetry
well, partly
I quit drinking twenty some-odd years ago
until Dottie died
and I moved to where I live now
the freshness of her death
and the new place
plus I had to put the Nipperdawg down
I had a hard time sleeping
decided I’d have a glass of vino
before I went to bed
couldn’t hurt
I tried it and it worked
put me in snooze-land with no problem
that has been five years ago
uh . . .
I’m still drinking the wine
only now
I’m drinking three to four glasses
at night
so I have to tell ya
between my nightly medication
and the cheap California burgundy
I sleep like the dead
for seven or eight hours
sometimes more
and nope
except for being a little fuzzy for about an hour
after getting out of bed
I have no hangover of any kind
my doctor thinks I drink too much
hah!
wasn’t her that couldn’t sleep
more’n three hours a night
she doesn’t even ask me about my wine intake
anymore
just felt like coming clean
about things

©March 21, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Make of yourself a light.--Mary Oliver . . . ~*~

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2014-03-23 08:37 AM


I should give that a try... Don't think I'd have to twist my wife's arm to get her to join me either

     


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-03-23 08:54 AM


I like that taste, Rex. Try it, you may like it.

~*~ Make of yourself a light.--Mary Oliver . . . ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2014-03-23 12:04 PM


They say sleep deprivation is as dangerous as driving drunk. Night caps for everyone!
Better than Ambien that has people driving in their sleep! Jerry if you want to pickle your liver to preserve it to last as long as the rest of your innards, you just go right ahead...who are we to judge. It is quality not quantity.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2014-03-23 12:08 PM


I don't know that I am pickling my liver, I have no problem so far. Of course I understand that it is entirely possible. Anyway, thank you for your comments, they are always appreciated.

~*~ Make of yourself a light.--Mary Oliver . . . ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2014-03-23 01:39 PM


whatever gets you through the night
it's alright, alright
enjoy !!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2014-03-23 02:03 PM


Ahhh . . . I've heard that song before I do believe, Emma. Thank you so much for stopping by.

~*~ Make of yourself a light.--Mary Oliver . . . ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2014-03-25 08:43 PM


Fine writing...whenever I read stories like this I think of my friend in California that I would visit until he passed away and I remember at first one six pack would suit him until it evolved into two...James
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
8 posted 2014-03-25 08:45 PM


Yep. Gotcha James.

~*~ Make of yourself a light.--Mary Oliver . . . ~*~

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